Tuesday, April 8, 2014
Introductory Paragraph
Salvador Dail once said, "Intelligence without ambition is a bird without wings." This quote means that without ambition you can't fully be the best you can be, ambition for you is like wings for a bird and you wouldn't be able to do the best of your abilities. This quote is true because without ambition, how are you supposed to reach or life goals and dreams if you're not striving for what you want in life. This can clearly be seen in the book Forrest Gump by Winston Groom, Forrest isn't the brightest compared to other people, but with the ambition he has for anything he sets his mind to he can drive his way into success. Intelligence, life goals, and difficult tasks are all things you'd need ambition in.
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On the fourth sentence you should convert it too two sentences instead. All your sentences are in the correct sequence. You also did a good job in not using first person. I can clearly see that your three points are, intelligence, life goals, and difficult tasks. You might just want to fix the fourth sentence and just use just another example from your book. Good Job !
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